Hi Mary I have went thorough your story and I thought that it was it was fantastic. Chloe was right that is why we went to the shopping centre we did not go there to play around. Did you enjoy the jump rope for heart?
Hi Mary, I love your comic strip. It is kind of similar to my comic strip on Jump Rope in the Glen Innes Centre. This shows that you have been listening and paying attention in class, good girl. I'm not to sure about the sequence in the comic strip, but it's alright. Did you brainstorm before you wrote? Well Done.
Hi Mary I have went thorough your story and I thought that it was it was fantastic. Chloe was right that is why we went to the shopping centre we did not go there to play around. Did you enjoy the jump rope for heart?
ReplyDeleteHi Mary, I love your comic strip. It is kind of similar to my comic strip on Jump Rope in the Glen Innes Centre. This shows that you have been listening and paying attention in class, good girl. I'm not to sure about the sequence in the comic strip, but it's alright. Did you brainstorm before you wrote? Well Done.
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