I am a Year 8 student at Glen Innes School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 11 and my teacher is Mrs Ramkolowan.
Friday, 25 October 2013
A mothers worst nightmare
Walt: write a narrative.
Everyone is evacuating their homes because a wildfire is out of control and it’s heading their way.
While everyone was evacuating a house caught on fire. Everyone stood and stared. ‘’HELP HELP’’ someone said from inside of the house. It was a single mother with her 2 month year old baby. The mother was so scared that she started filling up the pots and trying to put out the fire herself but it was no use. The wildfire had taken over half of her house. I’m never going to get out of here.
While she was holding the baby she was looking for an exit so that she could get out. When she was running down the hallway she saw a door that wasn't blocked so she started running fast like the wind but she didn’t make it. The burning wood fell in front of them.
The mother was going to faint because of the dark cloud of smoke was surrounding them. Suddenly the baby started crying. She was so scared because she thought that they were going to die in a fire. She said to her baby that she wants to see you grow up. Wee Ooo Wee Ooo Wee Ooo, it was the firefighters.
The firefighters were finally their they started putting out the fire. One of the firefighters smashed the door down and ran in with one of his friends to help find her and her baby. With her very last breath she shouted help and then they found her and her baby. Her and her baby made it out alive. Everyone even her parents were so happy to see their little girl alive.
She and her baby made it to the end and they also got out safe.
This story is about a mother and her child trapped in their own home and couldn't get out until the firefighters came and saved her and her child.
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