Walt: write a summary of the story.
One evening at the gym Hayley, her friends and her coach were training for the Junior National Championship. Every morning on Monday, Tuesday and Thursday Hayley always goes to the gym at 5.30am. After the gym Hayley walks home with her mum. Telling her mum how much she hates the high bar and that the high bar is a ‘’demon’’. She hated the high bar since she was a little girl. Every Monday, Tuesday and Thursday Hayley would go and talk to the high bar in a very little voice so she doesn’t have to be scared. When hayley was talking to the high bar she didn’t feel scared at all so she swung around in circle. Afterwards she was so proud of herself that she did it on the high bar.
Nice and interesting story. I love the fact that you use feeling in your story and that was lovely. The dazzling part of the story is when she overcomes her fear.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tainah but do you have any questions?
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