Walt: retell a story
One sunny afternoon Robin and her parents went outside. When they went outside there was a lot of mess after the flood come. After the flood vanished Robin saw a hopeless chook that was straggled in a lot of rubbish and it was in mud. Robin ran to help the poor chook. When Robin went to help it the chook had a little bit of feathers were missing on its left side of its body, so she decided to keep it.
Mum and dad didn't like the chook because it was all filthy. Dad said that it is half dead and you should chop the chooks head off. Mum said that it is not going to be staying with us but Robin did the opposite to what her parents said. She took chook into the back yard and started making holes in the garden for the chook. So mum and dad said if she was going to keep chook it’s her responsibility to feed it and look after it.
Dad and mum were getting use to chook and then they got too attached to chook and started loving her like it was their own pet. The next day Robin went looking for chook when Robin found chook Robin saw five brown eggs behind her. Robin reached behind chook and grabbed them. When Robin got home, chook ruined Mr Dick’s new peas. Mum told Robin that it is her pet and that she has to be responsible and talk to him. So Robin apologized but Mr Dick didn't really care so Robin gave him two of chook’s brown eggs.
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